My class Death Knight is just barely legal…

Ever since meeting his uncle, Arthur has pushed himself daily to achieve an arbitrary goal. He... Read more Ever since meeting his uncle, Arthur has pushed himself daily to achieve an arbitrary goal. He trained like nobody else did, longer than anybody else could. He neglected his personal relationships to pursue something he didn't even understand, in hindsight. When the time came for his class awakening ritual, he was ready. He was ready to receive a powerful starting class and to break free from his boring lifestyle.Well, you know what they say, "Be careful what you wish for, lest your wish be granted."Arthur was assigned the death knight class, which is just barely, technically, maybe legal.With it, he learns about what drove him to such simple minded ambition in the first place: his affinity. Now, he's faced with a dilemma: will he embrace it, or reject it?'My class [Death Knight] is just barely legal' is a laid back story with occasional tension, that describes Arthur, a young man, exploring the world, the system and his own mental health as he pursues his ambitions.This story is the first serious fiction I ever wrote, so while criticism is definitely welcomed, keep it polite. I'm going to rewrite the first few chapters at some point, since they're not as good as my later ones, but I'm focusing on my current chapters first. I don't have time to do both yet, since I'm also in the middle of my exams.What to expect from this story:-Litrpg elements-A chaotic good aligned protagonist (that starts off as a neutral good protagonist)-(Hopefully) interesting characters. What not to expect from this story:-Grimdark elements-Harem-An enslaved protagonist. (I mention this due to the background of the mc's class)Release schedule: 1 chapter every other day, 2pm European time (14:00) Collapse Adventurers, Dungeons, Magic, Overpowered Protagonist, Protagonist Strong from the Start, Male Protagonist, Weak to Strong, Grimdark I wasn't here, it's all a work of your imagination and schizophrenia! I wish MC would turn into villain. Quote: crazywizardIt shows later, when he gets dark affinity and what it means:Spoilerin short, he was so single minded that he forgot everything for training. He's more than spartan as you can see from his stats, like an undeadSpoilerI felt like crying during his 2nd class evolution. The one where his class evolved to hollow essence knight The events include grimdark yet the description says it is not At the age of 18, there are 3 times more statistics than an adult.. is he on steroids? Why the stupid attribute of wisdom? What does it affect? As a rule, the authors who insert this attribute do not possess it themselves It shows later, when he gets dark affinity and what it means:Spoilerin short, he was so single minded that he forgot everything for training. He's more than spartan as you can see from his stats, like an undead Simply people don't realize how op intelligence is. When you can have a thousand or more different thoughts per second while your enemy only one to ten , it is extremely op.Also generally you will rarely find an author that has put real work or research on his novel. Most write as they go. Plot holes be damned. it seems to me it was possible to do with one intellect and, depending on its quantity, add parallel thinking. you don't need to invent anything else It's not about investing something. It is about considering the implications of something. We simply can't experience this directly thus it is difficult for us to consider what such capabilities would imply.Honestly it isn't just intelligence. Perception is another thing. On the same not movement speed. After a certain movement speed limit higher perception is required to be able to move without spontaneously exploding because you can't control your body properly. Then this leads to higher thinking processing speed in order to be able to process the extra information you gather through your higher perception. When characters evolve to a higher level of being but their thinking patterns remain exactly the same as an average human in an average urban center in Earth in the 21st century. This goes on and on and on. Rank D+ So is it good or bad? is between low and medium Esto no se parece al libro de la muerte?. Tienen la misma trama central por lo que parece. Any poison testers?